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November 11, 2010
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Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
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F/8.0
17 mm
100
Nov 11, 2010, 1:11:31 PM
Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
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~tonemapped HDRI, 3 exposures
~Photoshop, Photomatix, Lightroom
~Canon EOS 400D + Ef-S 17-85 IS USM
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Alright, I've given this some thought and you want critiques, so...

I already told you that this is definitely my favorite piece in your everlasting gaze folder. Furthermore I told you which ones I did not like as much and why: I always thought some of those photographs were lacking something eye-catching, or were just a bit over the top and had something trashy to them. All better in this one...
First thing is that the road is winding. Even if you weren't too sure about it at first, it gives the picture even more of the boundlessness you wanted to achieve. Second, all the little posts on the left and the trees in the background make the photography more 'accessible', but don't distract the viewer too much. Third is, the sky looks interesting without being too tawdry. Doesn't look like a lollypop, but it isn't less beautiful!
I was just wondering a bit about the sky being that dark at the top. I don't really get the effect you wanted to achieve. Maybe I'd also remove the cut off tree at the left, so it can't distract from those two in the middle.

Conclusive I do really like this!
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*AlexHawkPhotography Dec 9, 2010  Student Photographer
I love how dark the sky gets towards the tippy top!
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=Ditze Dec 19, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :D
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*Muskeg Nov 16, 2010   Photographer
Lovely work!
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=Ditze Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :D
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~tripptaylor Nov 14, 2010  Professional Photographer
NICE job...
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=Ditze Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
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Mood: Joy ~DanielleMiner Nov 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
nice processing
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=Ditze Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow:
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Mood: Joy =SuperSnappz Nov 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Superb perspective and processing, I like the vast openess of this shot and the road that seems endless. Nice work.
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=Ditze Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow:
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