Alright, I've given this some thought and you want critiques, so...
I already told you that this is definitely my favorite piece in your everlasting gaze folder. Furthermore I told you which ones I did not like as much and why: I always thought some of those photographs were lacking something eye-catching, or were just a bit over the top and had something trashy to them. All better in this one... First thing is that the road is winding. Even if you weren't too sure about it at first, it gives the picture even more of the boundlessness you wanted to achieve. Second, all the little posts on the left and the trees in the background make the photography more 'accessible', but don't distract the viewer too much. Third is, the sky looks interesting without being too tawdry. Doesn't look like a lollypop, but it isn't less beautiful! I was just wondering a bit about the sky being that dark at the top. I don't really get the effect you wanted to achieve. Maybe I'd also remove the cut off tree at the left, so it can't distract from those two in the middle.
I already told you that this is definitely my favorite piece in your everlasting gaze folder. Furthermore I told you which ones I did not like as much and why: I always thought some of those photographs were lacking something eye-catching, or were just a bit over the top and had something trashy to them. All better in this one...
First thing is that the road is winding. Even if you weren't too sure about it at first, it gives the picture even more of the boundlessness you wanted to achieve. Second, all the little posts on the left and the trees in the background make the photography more 'accessible', but don't distract the viewer too much. Third is, the sky looks interesting without being too tawdry. Doesn't look like a lollypop, but it isn't less beautiful!
I was just wondering a bit about the sky being that dark at the top. I don't really get the effect you wanted to achieve. Maybe I'd also remove the cut off tree at the left, so it can't distract from those two in the middle.
Conclusive I do really like this!
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