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don't go in the light by =Ditze:iconDitze:

Categories Photography > Street

©2009 =Ditze
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Artist's Comments

~single hipshot, BW conversion
~Canon EOS 400D + Ef-S 17-85 IS USM

-location: Rottenbuch, Germany

Critiques


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=Eliza-mac Apr 16, 2009, 6:08:12 AM
Overall, I think this is an excellent street shot in an interesting location... a place worthy of a second visit.
I really like the subject matter, the spiritual undertones and the figures moving from the darkness into the light.
I like the framing but I find the lighter area at the bottom of the photograph a little distracting, and a slightly lower angle would have given this shot the extra punch making it even more dramatic.
It works very well in black and white, it adds to the drama and helps focus the attention on the action. Good work Denis!
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=XxTrinityxX Apr 15, 2009, 10:20:27 AM
I love the lack of colour in the photo it gives it a very otherworldly feel and accents the bright portal in the center.
I would have had the angle different, closer to the ground and at a sharper angle toward the people. It would have a more urgent feel to the photo as the title suggests. The current angle suggests a peaceful, accepting feeling. Whereas the title feels like it should be a pleading and begging feeling to the piece.

I do however enjoy the good location choice for the photo, keep up the good work I look foward to seeing more from you.
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~toiiiine Apr 15, 2009, 3:20:45 AM
great one!

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=Ditze Apr 15, 2009, 5:13:28 AM
thanks mate! :D

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no names, no places - only faces... *monotheism
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~mecengineer Apr 15, 2009, 11:09:30 AM
very nice composition.Congratulations.
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=Ditze Apr 15, 2009, 11:10:59 AM
thank you :)

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no names, no places - only faces... *monotheism
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=Ditze Apr 15, 2009, 3:33:32 PM
:bow:

thank you very much! :)

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no names, no places - only faces... *monotheism
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*kulten Apr 16, 2009, 2:05:01 AM
Great job. I really like it.

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=Ditze Apr 16, 2009, 2:11:36 AM
thank you :)

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no names, no places - only faces... *monotheism
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~m0nkE Apr 18, 2009, 7:14:50 AM
great shot :+fav: =)

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
1/45 second
F/8.0
35 mm
400
Apr 6, 2009, 10:38:24 AM

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